Letra de Where the lines overlap(corregida para el webmaster)

Hola, creo que la letra que estoy subiendo es mejor porque las dos que se encuentranal principio les hace falta la siguiente parte: "give me attention, i need it now, too much distance", y ademas tienen muchas fallas(ambas), hay palabras que ni siquiera existen en ingles, por otra parte les ponen muchos signos de interrogacion(ocea estan dando a entender que no saben o no entienden que dice en esa parte). Esas son las razones por las que creo que mi letra mejora, ojala lo tomen en cuenta gracias.





Give me attention
I need it now
too much distance
to measure it out
out loud.

Tracing patterns
across a personal map
and making pictures
Where the lines Overlap
(Where the lines overlap)


No one is as lucky as us
we´re not at the end but
oh! we already won
No, no, no one
is as lucky as us
is as lucky as us.

Call me over
tell me how
you got so far
never making
a single sound.
I´m not used to it
but i can learn
nothing to it
i´ve never been happier
(never been happier)

No one is as lucky as us
we´re not at the end but
oh! we already won
Oh no, no one
is as lucky as us
is as lucky as us.

Now i´ve got a feeling
if i sang this loud enough
you would sing it back to me
i´ve got a feeling if i sang this loud enough
you would sing it back to me.
I´ve got a feeling, i´ve got a feeling!!
would you sing it back to me,
would you sing it back to me.

No one is as lucky as us...